Complicated Essay!!!

wow,,,i don't know that writing an essay need many step to done it with complete essay,,,actually,,im not very understand about everything,,,but,with your guidance i try to understand it even a bit slow to understand,,,i don't know what i have to write,,but i think the 'thing' that u taught us very helping us to write the good essay!!,,,

I'm an ACTOR

Miss Dia,,,did u think i can get Oscar or Academy awards for my acting in bel class?,,
i think i deserve it(juz kiddin),,,it really hard to acting with speaking in english,,,even acting with speak in malay is hard to me then when u ask we to acting in english it make me want to leave da bel class u know!!!but i know im now at univercity so i have to be brave n confident,,,so i try to not be shy,,,lastly it quite interesting activities,,,when i remember back what happen tat day i laughing on myself,,,

Attention to Miss Dia!!!

harlow Miss Dia,,firstly sory 4 my broken english,,ok,,i'm Mohamad Shahrul Azhar bin Shaharudin,,im from JBD1D1,,u can call me as azhar,,i was a student from SMK Taman Molek,,i think i got a very bad problem about my english language,,tat y i very shy to speak in english(sory if i speak in malay in your class),,but i know you dont mad bout tat,,so,,i hope u can help me to improve my english,,n i try to give my full commitment during bel class,,,okie TQ,,,