Friday, September 11, 2009

touching or laughing?,,,

WHYsoSERIOUS my fren?
let me make u feel better
i will sing for you a song
the song is When I'm gone by Eminem
i know this is your favourite song
or,i will give you the present at your next birthday
i know you miss your mother
but,im will always beside you
even you're sad or happy
or,we will eat ayam goreng together at the hari raya that coming soon
we will go to the mekah to make a haji
i know you're waiting for this moment
even we don't have similarities or common between us
i'm still hope our friendship will be forever and ever
even we're not meet again
i hope you can make a drawing as the mark to our relationship
that all!!!




i hope the readers can make the comment from this poem
any critic or comment will be accepted




Created by:TOWNIQUE
Reference:Kindergarden poem



Dinukilankan oleh bile?

11 comments:

  1. closed accSeptember 12, 2009 at 1:46 AM

    seriously, sweeeeeeeeet !!!!

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  2. AZHARSeptember 14, 2009 at 3:42 PM

    gizzz,,,,
    some1 tell me how to private this post!!!!

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  3. belonSeptember 14, 2009 at 4:10 PM

    huh poyos.haha

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  4. megiSeptember 15, 2009 at 8:54 AM

    memey: yeah i agree with you, i think this guy has that poetic side inside of him. he's just too shy to show it off

    azhar: if you make block this post from me, i will haunt your nights and turn your sweet dreams to nightmares. seriously, azhar, you are a bit creative. i guess myrul would be flattered to read this

    amirul hakim: i'll read yours after this. so you better turn on the poetic side of your head

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  5. MyRuLSeptember 15, 2009 at 2:14 PM

    sgt t'haru..
    thats my fren..
    huhuhu..

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  6. AZHARSeptember 15, 2009 at 2:15 PM

    im poetic,,,
    but,,i think i show at the wrong place,,,
    what a shame!!,,

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  7. megiSeptember 16, 2009 at 11:52 AM

    see, myrul is already touched. you guys are besties..
    azhar, don't the comments flatter you in a way? you do feel proud of yourself right right right? i read your mind

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  8. AZHARSeptember 16, 2009 at 4:11 PM

    hahahahha,,,
    yeah,,,
    now im proud because myrul like my poem,,
    but,,im still shy published this poem to public,,,what a shame(again and again),,,

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  9. myrulSeptember 16, 2009 at 4:24 PM

    hehe...
    dont be so proud..

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  10. AZHARSeptember 17, 2009 at 6:10 PM

    myrul,,,
    i know u proud of me,,,
    but,,you just don't show it,,
    i understand,,,
    xD

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  11. megiSeptember 26, 2009 at 4:13 PM

    owh you guys, stop it. i know you guys are not that nice to each other (-_-)

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